Pie chart and table
The given pie chart illustrates destination of Anthropology students after graduating their degree course and table depicts the salaries of that students after five years of work.
First of all, graduates students decide their future path based on four different destinations, which are full-time work, part-time work, part-time work + postgrad study and full time postgrad study. Almost half the numbers of all graduate students choose to do full-time work, to be precise it is 52% of all student graduates. The culture of postgrad study is to be seen less in graduates, not only 5% students are doing part-time work + postgrad study but also 8% students are doing full-time postgrad study. 12% students are there who could not find any job and remain unemployed. 8% students are likely to be there whose status is still unknown.
Secondly, the students are employed in freelance consultants, government sectors and private companies. After five years of work in these sectors only five percent students are there in freelance and government sectors who are receiving $25000-$49999, whereas 40% and 50% students are receiving $100000+ in these both sectors respectively. In private companies approximate twice percentage of students are receiving $25000-$74999 than freelance and government sectors have more numbers of students who have salaries $75000+ than private companies.
Overall, after graduation Anthropology students are more driven towards full-time job and likely to get more amount of salaries in freelance and government sectors rather than private companies after five years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...rk, part-time work + postgrad study and full time postgrad study. Almost half the numbers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53497942387 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7570998048 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497942386831 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9329430119 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0453789070184 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025969799324 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077909397972 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06492449831 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112452529729 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.