The pie chart below shows the percentage of five types of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

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The pie chart below shows the percentage of five types of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The pie chart illustrates about proportion of books which classified in five groups and were sold by shopkeeper from 1972 till 2012.
To begin with, it is clear by analysing pie chart that, during first year (1972), unspecified books represented high proportion of selling (25%). However, in other two year, this shown little decrease in count which was 20% in 1992 and 12% in 2012. Furthermore, thrice kinds of books revealed same count of proportion (20%) included adult fiction, children's fiction and biography which were purchased by individuals in era of 1972. Apart from that, only 15% of books which related to travel were sold in same year.
In addition, during 1992, fiction books of adult and children represented similar proportion with difference of 3%. Likewise, travel and biography related books were purchased with same count of proportion with difference of 3%. On contrast, adult fictions were sold with huge number (45%) in comparison to other types during last era (2012). Yet, fictions of pupil had 25% count of selling. Apart from that, books of travel and biography revealed similar count with distinction of 2% respectively.
Overall, adult fiction books were on higher count with sudden alter during last year, yet other four of categories of books were sold with disturbance in percentage.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, apart from, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1455399061 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60016767941 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50234741784 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.028205872 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189038876177 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088425276437 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813252631851 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158551000282 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920781021559 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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