The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
... clothes in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 . Overall, it is clear from the two char...
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Suggestion: ,
...s in travel and stood in the first place , and film/music percentage was the lowes...
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...film/music percentage was the lowest one ,stood in the last place. The most onlin...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Film
...sales dropped slightly to 28 percentage.Film/music came next with exactly 33 percent...
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...ame next with exactly 33 percent in 2013 ,but in 2003 this type of online sales wa...
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Suggestion: Third
...online sales was lowest with 21 percent.Third place of online shopping sales was book...
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...inally to 22%. At the bottom of the list , there was shoping of clothes. Online cl...
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...he least popular in 2013 with 16 percent , but in 2003 it was in second place with...
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...he other online shopping retail sectors.In 2003, the clothing industry boasted an ...
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Suggestion: Interestingly
...% of total online sales in New Zealand.Interestingly, online sales of books eventually over...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, still, then, third, kind of, such as, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80751173709 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83288729034 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49765258216 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.761647218 43.030603864 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.666666667 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 22.9334400587 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 5.23603664747 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24538126585 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134567521046 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105013723378 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129511423187 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114467622707 0.0819641961636 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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