The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries india and China.
Write a report to university lecture and describe the data.
The pie charts illustrate, the average amount of food consumption throughout the world and which compared with two main countries like India and China during the year of 2008. Units
are measured in percentage.
Overall, both countries show different food consumption from the world average, processed food was the most significant food item over the world (41%) and also in China and India (34% and 39% respectively), while in the world the least priority was nuts and seeds in 2008.
As it is observed, vegetables and fruits accounted for the next important consumed foods in China (32%) in contrast to India (23%), whereas, which comprised of 29% in world food consumption.
Regarding animal food, India was the highest level about 27% whilst, only 15% Chinese had eaten by non vegetarian food. Furthermore, 26% of the world average consumption of food was animal food. Moreover, in terms of nuts and seeds 19% of Chinese includes this on their food cart, while, a mere 11% Indians like to eat such foods.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'in contrast', 'in contrast to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.3125 0.268076937826 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.0913461538462 0.116061578633 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0865384615385 0.0759168565197 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0240384615385 0.0366838410393 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00961538461538 0.0131127313244 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139423076923 0.155750635184 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0336538461538 0.0379272487307 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59781509249 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00961538461538 0.0210936926555 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0721153846154 0.0948980150116 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00961538461538 0.00967000014798 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1067.0 1161.00487805 92% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.9 86% => OK
Chars per words: 6.31360946746 5.90752243213 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.278106508876 0.337110787985 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224852071006 0.247514529752 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183431952663 0.171178102325 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130177514793 0.112407865282 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59781509249 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.546246751206 115% => OK
Word variations: 58.9439098691 49.3433353143 119% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 24.1428571429 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.6428220256 42.9750493124 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.428571429 135.714022679 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 0.689975730869 207% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 46.6280642434 47.7609492067 98% => OK
Elegance: 3.88461538462 2.94281807926 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.642153360817 0.418131533498 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132209765476 0.181151798455 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0960881043469 0.0850326197045 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.737895585675 0.706616315825 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.299379648806 0.157042692854 191% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.300434570047 0.228904883108 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187696234283 0.108899403657 172% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.157335300402 0.367819155151 43% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.123633848504 0.0812612215331 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365550031 0.316326947829 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180497485379 0.0921553760075 196% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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