the process of generation of electricity

Essay topics:

the process of generation of electricity

The chart illustrates how electricity is generated at a hydro-power station.

Overall, it is observed that it is a cyclical process. It starts with the collection of water in a dam followed by an opening of a valve that creates speedy flow towards the turbines to generate electricity.

Now turning towards the details of steps, it is witnessed that at first water gets accumulated in the reservoir on which a dam is constructed. Then, the valve which plays a vital role is opened during the day to allow water to gush towards the reversible turbines. After hitting the turbines, power is produced which passes through various power lines to the national grid. Finally, the national grid supplies electricity to villages, hospitals, and other towns.

Nevertheless, the remaining water flows to the low-level reservoir and during the night it is pumped back to the high-level reservoir to follow the same step the next day.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...villages, hospitals, and other towns. Nevertheless, the remaining water flows ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, nevertheless, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18954248366 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86284955192 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5532954613 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162604466994 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767205840055 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896284978702 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11354450775 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100334259013 0.0819641961636 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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