Quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002

Essay topics:

Quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002

The graph depicts the amount of products in million tones delivered in the UK during the period of 28 years starting from 1974 to 2002.

At the first glance, in terms of road, the number of goods delivered occupied the line chart while the pipeline one has always stood at the bottom of the list.

it is obvious that road and water proportion show a fluctuation in the time frame of 1978 to 1998. Especially to the road, it was plummeting, the indication of this was the gradually increase in 1982 at around 65 million tones and the sudden sharply decreasement begin from 1994 to 1998. By the way, it still took over the first place of the most common transportation at the end of the period. Navigation and rail illustrates the same downward and the considerably late surge trend, ending at nearly 62 and 41 million tones of products respectively in the year 2000.

In contrast to the 3 methods above, pipeline can be seen at the smallest group but with a slow and steady growth in these 28 years.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ays stood at the bottom of the list. it is obvious that road and water proporti...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e end of the period. Navigation and rail illustrates the same downward and the co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, still, while, in contrast, by the way, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56906077348 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54598440056 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613259668508 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0890754485 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.142857143 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877742899548 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388578003576 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580167900311 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588696301325 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658188741486 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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