The table below gives information about UK independent films.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table represents data about independent movies released in the UK in 2012.
Overall, drama and documentary genre accounted for the highest proportion of movie releases, however, most significant income was generated from the genre ‘comedy’.
As the graph shows, 26 comedy films were released in the UK in 2012 which generated about 45.4% of income from its tickets. Even though drama and documentary movies represented 23.6% individually, the profit made from the sale of tickets was only 8.3% and 2.9% respectively. In terms of horror and thriller films, their number of releases were relatively similar which was 14 for horror and 13 for thriller. However, income from the sale of horror movies was relatively higher than the thriller movies, at 20.2%.
On the other hand, only 1 biopic movie was released in the year 2012 which surprisingly accounted for 9.1% of total profit. With regards to crime movies, the production of 7 movies hardly represented 4.7% of income. Likewise, the release of 5 romance movies only made 0.8% income as compared to action movies at 4.1%. Lastly, 8 other genre of films were produced but was only able to generate revenue of no more than 3.2%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'genre' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'genres'.
Suggestion: genres
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, likewise, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1116751269 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77925155804 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558375634518 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.232333723 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.7 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0437306671483 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261623712298 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542814632317 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536600891443 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742778474117 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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