The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in 6 countries.
The supplied table delineates the information regarding date opened, kilometers of route, and passengers per year of the underground railway systems in six different countries.
A glance at the table reveals that the oldest railway system started in London covering highest distance while the latest one of all the given countries is in Los Angeles. In addition, Tokyo's underground railway system has the maximum number of passengers.
Now turning to details, in terms of passengers, Tokyo is the topmost with 1927 million passengers in a year followed by Paris with 1191 million travelers. Although underground railways was opened in London at the earliest of all in 1863 and its route is 394 kilometers, the number of people travelling in a year on this railway system are 775 million.
It can be explicitly observed that the recent ones i.e. Los Angeles(2001), Kyoto(1981) and Washington DC(1976) are the bottom three in terms of route, with 28 km, 11 km, and 126 km respectively, and commuters, having 50 million/year, 45 million/year, and 144 million/year respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26744186047 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06829157616 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0011973056 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217199482106 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134253778622 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993388590544 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156184013235 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110518033305 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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