The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table compares the percentages of 8 different kind of typical household equipment which was owned by the British in 11-year period from 1972 to 1983. Totally, the most popular consumer durable over years was television.
It can be clearly seen from the table that the amount of television possession achieved the highest percentage, for about 93% in the first year, continued increasing gradually to 96 and peaked at 98% in 1983. Next came, vacuum cleaner and refrigerator were the most popular equipment after TV which was owned by 87 and 73% British in 1972 and plateaued at 95% for the last year.
As for central heating and telephone, about 40% households had them in 1972 and went up quickly to 64 and 77% respectively. Regarding to dishwasher, this machine was less popular than the others, stood at only 3% in 1972 and increased minimally to 5% in the last year. Interestingly, although video was introduced a later time in 1983, it plateaued at 18%.
Overall, the ownership of all machines increased from 1972 to 1983.
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'regarding', 'as for', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197044334975 0.268076937826 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.128078817734 0.116061578633 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0935960591133 0.0759168565197 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0591133004926 0.0366838410393 161% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0147783251232 0.0131127313244 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147783251232 0.155750635184 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0344827586207 0.0379272487307 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76703962105 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295566502463 0.0210936926555 140% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0788177339901 0.0948980150116 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00492610837438 0.00437022459523 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00985221674877 0.00967000014798 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1034.0 1161.00487805 89% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.9 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.875 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.301136363636 0.337110787985 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278409090909 0.247514529752 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1875 0.171178102325 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147727272727 0.112407865282 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76703962105 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.546246751206 114% => OK
Word variations: 59.4279680707 49.3433353143 120% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6342149071 42.9750493124 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 135.714022679 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 49.8409090909 47.7609492067 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.87804878049 2.94281807926 64% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362924987482 0.418131533498 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128232916482 0.181151798455 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0548705685087 0.0850326197045 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.695089935386 0.706616315825 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178307048179 0.157042692854 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18528228685 0.228904883108 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874646964413 0.108899403657 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.34141621533 0.367819155151 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.123587236867 0.0812612215331 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259806817185 0.316326947829 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501914096983 0.0921553760075 54% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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