the table below shows the percentage of main types of dwelling in Victoria the Northern Territory and Tasmania Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant

Essay topics:

the table below shows the percentage of main types of dwelling in Victoria, the Northern Territory, and Tasmania. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant

Given the table illustrating information about the ratio changes of for types of the place of accommodation in 3 different regions. In general, it is evident that house which the type is chosen the most by citizens of 3 regions.
As can be seen from the table, the house is the most popular choice both in 2001 and 2006 in all of the places they decided living. However, Tasmania was the region where the house became more populated, the figure slightly increased from 88% to 89%, compared with Victoria and the Northern Territory, in which the percentages of the house dropped by 3% and 2% respectively. By contrast, the other type of dwelling is the most less choice in the Victoria and Tasmania, individually increasing from 1% to 2% and decreasing from 2% to 1%, except for in The Nor where the least popular living place was the Flat and apartment, rising from 8% to 11%.
Besides, the semi-attached house was the second favorited in 3 regions when citizens chose. there are witnessed a slight rise from 11% to 12% in Victoria, from 13% to 15% in the Nor, and from 3% to 4% for the last place.

Votes
Average: 9.4 (5 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...popular choice both in 2001 and 2006 in all of the places they decided living. However, Ta...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'less' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: less
...rast, the other type of dwelling is the most less choice in the Victoria and Tasmania, in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...rited in 3 regions when citizens chose. there are witnessed a slight rise from 11% to...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, second, well, except for, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56060606061 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65259237377 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9863931552 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121464058094 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563578300275 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507352759837 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780378405199 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438844214562 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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