The table below shows the result of a survey in which people of different age group were asked about their favorite TV program Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The table below shows the result of a survey in which people of different age group were asked about their favorite TV program.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates an overview concerning the information about the outcomes of a survey focusing on the preferable TV program of people from numerous age groups.

Overall, it can be seen that news program was equally preferable to the age group of 16-20 as well as 21-25.

In the group of 11-15, the proportion of people who enjoy watching cartoon was the highest, whereas it was the lowest for news program and the figures were 29% and 6% accordingly. In the same group, the proportion of people who watch feature films was 18% which was 2% lower than that of TV dramas. On the other hand in the age group of 16-20, the proportion of people who watch cartoons and the news program was the same with 21%.

In the age group of 21-25, the most significant proportion of people enjoy watching news whereas cartoons seamed the least popular TV program and the figures were 21% and 4% successively. While watching TV dramas was equally preferable to the age group of 11-15 and 16-20 with 20% popularity, it was 6% less popular in the age group of 21-25.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (TV) must be used with a third-person verb: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
... a survey focusing on the preferable TV program of people from numerous age groups. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64361702128 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50722699187 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457446808511 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9817724928 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203559898421 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122663929892 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459229613079 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146360637233 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520113112574 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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