The tables give information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight in two particular cites in the same week in May 2007

Essay topics:

The tables give information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight in two particular cites in the same week in May 2007

The tables compare two specific cities, namely Mumbai and Moscow, in terms of the temperatures and the daylight time in the three later days of the weekend in May 2007.
Generally, Mumbai was significantly hotter than Moscow, however, Moscow had more the sunshine hours.
Regarding the temperatures of the two regions, Mumbai had consistently high warmth, fluctuating between 33-34oC at its peak, and dropping only to 29oC at its low each day. In contrast, the weather of Moscow was lower dramatically, with the highest and lowest temperatures of the day from 8-13oC and 2-9oC respectively. Additionally, Saturday was the hottest day of Mumbai, while for Moscow was the Sunday.
Relating to the hours of sunlight, the sun rose in Mumbai at 6.00 am every day and set into 7.05 pm excepting the Saturday on which the sunset started later more than 10 minutes compared to the remaining two days. Nevertheless, the time of sunlight lighted Moscow was more, with the sun rising between 4.05 am and 4.15 am per day and setting at 10.00 pm each of the recorded days. Furthermore, Saturday had the longest amount of daylight in both areas

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93717277487 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73842510718 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565445026178 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3707882184 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111299262484 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560591378554 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761027735415 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867050120499 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949056575972 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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