The tables show the average salaries of graduates and non-graduates in the UK in 2010.
Statistical data on the average income of people who graduated and not graduated in all age groups and distinct age groups in the UK in the year 2010 are illustrated in the given tables.
As can be observed explicitly from the chart, average salaries of graduates of all or different age groups in the UK occupied the overwhelming majority, especially income of those aged 52.
In 2010,while the figure for average salaries of graduates in all age groups reached £54,000, non-graduates’salaries stood at more than a half by £29,000, compared to graduate’s salaries. At the same time, graduates aged 54 were paid the highest salaries,at £34,380 whereas the salaries of those aged 22 were the lowest , at only £24,000. Followed by the aged of 42, 32, and 62 received £33,500, £32,200, and £29,900 in turn.
Compared with the income of the graduates, the salaries of the non-graduates were less than. While the highest salaries were paid at £19,100 of those aged 42 and 52, the youngest aged 22 and oldest aged 62 were paid the lowest salaries at £14,300 and £15,280. Besides, non-graduates aged 52 received £18,600.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13013724412 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7197979501 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323003986299 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180666745299 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120908163865 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229302338558 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358711464867 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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