Task 1: Line Graph-The Graph Below Shows The Number Of Enquiries Received By The Tourist Information Office In One City Over A Six-Month Period In 2011.
The line graph presents how many enquiries were sent to the Tourist Information Office (TIO) in a particular city through three means of communication from January to June2011. These were in person, by a written form in letter or email, or by telephone.
Overall, while the number of enquiries via telephone and in person increased significantly, those in the written forms declined. Although in-person contacts were the least common at the beginning of the year, they were the most common type of communication over the last three months.
In January, there were about 400 face-to-face enquiries; however, people came into the office more and more frequently during the period. However, in this period, people went straight to the office more than they used to in the first month. This resulted in a linear growth over the period at an average rate of about 250 per month.
In contrast, both the number of enquiries coming into the office via letter/mail and telephone decreased slightly after the first month. However, people started to call the office to make the enquiries more after February, increasing at an average of 200 enquiries each month. On the other hand, the last method, by mail or letter, had a steady decrease of about 50% over the period, from just under 800 to a little under 400.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59772230175 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8029512377 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228268575688 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863546683805 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639129106356 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129264541002 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049338175291 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.