Topic The graph below gives information about U S government spending on research between 1980 and 2008 | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Topic: The graph below gives information about U.S. government spending on research between 1980 and 2008.

The given line graph compares how much money that America government pay on a research in two timelines: 1980 and 2008.
It is clear that health,space and general science increased over period time whilst energy and other exes changed constantly. Health was the highest expenditure, followed by other fields. Health was the number that the most significant change.
In 1980, the number of health was the highest at about 8 billions dollars, followed by other expenditures with about 6 billions dollars. The number of space was higher than the figures that of energy accounting for $5 and $2.5 billions respectively. Genercal science was the lowest proportion.
In 2008, the trend of health, space and general science increased while energy and other expenditures flactuated. Health was still highest with about $18 billions, followed by space accounted for nearly 9 billions dollars. The proportion of energy was in no.3 with 7 billions dollars while other regions and genergal science shared the same figure at $5 billions and this proportion was the lowest expenditure.

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ch money that America government pay on a research in two timelines: 1980 and 2008. It is...
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Line 2, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , space
... 1980 and 2008. It is clear that health,space and general science increased over peri...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he figures that of energy accounting for and .5 billions respectively. Genercal s...
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Line 4, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nergal science shared the same figure at billions and this proportion was the low...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31360946746 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74456725497 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3867552547 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911758624123 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04197731571 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709445543581 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833050099782 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887865539694 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments