Transport preferences among young people from different countries

Essay topics:

Transport preferences among young people from different countries

The bar chart illustrate the transport preferences of young people for daily commutes in countries such as Great Britain, USA, Germany and France. The usages unites measures in percentage.

Overall, the usage of cars was the most popular type of transport in all countries, except Germany. Whereas, motorcycles were the least preference in other countries except in USA.

On one hand, Great Britain and USA 60 % of people use cars as their transport. On the other hand, Motorcycles were less(10%) preferred by people in UK compared to USA (30%), when it comes to Bicycles it is vice versa.

In Germany, around 45% people prefers bicycle and 40% choose to user cars, but when it comes to motorcycle it records low percentage which is around 15. If we see France, people preferred cars over the other transport system.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'unite'.
Suggestion: unite
...in, USA, Germany and France. The usages unites measures in percentage. Overall, the...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sport in all countries, except Germany. Whereas, motorcycles were the least preference ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99270072993 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60942018924 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656934306569 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2919227179 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279880250996 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122583426639 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820760289984 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175576955095 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467697992447 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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