The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs illustrate the motives of smoker stop smoking, and the specific time they want to leave the smoking habit.

At a glance, it is noticeable that the principal reason for people giving up smoking is to have better physical well-being, and the majority of smoker have an intention to give up their habit.

Regarding the first table, to maintain general health status is the main reason having chosen by more than 64% of smoker in all group, followed by financial consideration at around 30%. Just above 20% of the questioned smoker in all group consider less risk of getting smoking-related illnesses as a motive to stop the habit. Lastly, lower than a fourth of smoker state that the reason they leave the habit because of having health issues and family pressure.

Moving to the second table, 60% of the smoker having 20+ cigarettes per day intent to give up smoking and this lower by about 6% of the remaining group. As much as 32% of people smoking 10-19 cigarettes daily decides to stop their habit within the next 6 months. Both 20+ and 10-19 cigarettes groups have a plan to give up their habit next years. In contrast, just a small percentage of the questioned smoker choose to stop smoking in the following month.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...wer by about 6% of the remaining group. As much as 32% of people smoking 10-19 cig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, regarding, second, so, well, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79069767442 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4895498191 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1402336775 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.444444444 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00580785580622 0.215688989381 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00268459648255 0.103423049105 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00759318551023 0.0843802449381 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00329777948973 0.15604864568 2% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00571192162838 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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