Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Essay topics: Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The pie charts provide information for the following areas: global population, global expenditure and use of resources.

Examination of world population shows that more than half is Asian. Europeans and Americans make up for the same proportion (14%) whereas one in ten people around the world is African. Other races in combination account for only 5%.

Turning to spending pattern, nearly a quarter of wordwide expenditure is on food, which is double the amount spent on housing. Next come transport activities, which cost 18% of the total spending, while only one third of this is spent on clothing. Interestingly, unspecified reasons for spending money take up the vast bulk of total expenditure, at 40%

Lastly, it is remarakable that the U.S.A and Europe use more resources than the rest of the world combined (60% to 40%, respectively).

Overall, while the sum of Americans and Europeans still accounts for a starkly smaller percentage of the world population in comparison to the figure for Asian, the former consume drastically more resources than the latter. Also, expenditure analysis shows that most of the money is spent on ambiguous reasons.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, so, still, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31720430108 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89093375515 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0354339207 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.888888889 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850381227784 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353816223761 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357237756159 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0485424330769 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033102635668 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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