You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The first histogram illustrates a survey about the statistic between marriage and divorces in the US during the three decades since 1970. The second bar chart show the adult Americans' marital status in the year 1970 and 2000.
Overall, Americans chose to marry more than they divorced throughout the entire survey time, even though the number of marriages decreased significantly. In addition, not only did American preferred getting married than other marital status in 1970, but also as was the case in 2000.
Some 2.5 millions of Americans got married in 1970, then stagnating this figure, so it was clearly 1.5 times larger than they got divorced. Not until in 1980 the figure of marriage declined gradually to 2 millions by the end of 2000. However, the number of divorces fluctuated briefly between 1.4 millions and 2 millions, eventually this figure levelling off at 2 millions in 2000.
In addition, about 70% of mature American were in married status, and accordingly the percentage of this group was far lager than never married(nearly 15%), widowed(less than 10%), and divorced(around 2%) in 1970. However, the proportion of never married increased to approximately 20%, while the fraction of married dropped by 10%. Also, the ratio of widowed and divorced kept the relative low level in 1970 and 2000.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...also as was the case in 2000. Some 2.5 millions of Americans got married in 1970, then sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, briefly, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13488372093 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72110911755 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586046511628 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0178525898 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 5.23603664747 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238198820553 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101925176711 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056450041748 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158994987027 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675763540673 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.