Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice Write a letter to your friend in your letter say why a driving licence is advantageous recommend a driving school give any extra guidance tips

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Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.
Write a letter to your friend in your letter
-say why a driving licence is advantageous
-recommend a driving school
-give any extra guidance/tips

Dear Ankita,

I hope you are enjoying your time in Bangalore. It has been a long time since you have shifted to the new city. Due to work it is very difficult to take some time out to meet. Yesterday, I met Animesh and he told me that you are planning to apply for a driving licence.

I recently got my driving licence and found that it is really beneficial to have it. Using public transportation now-a-days has become very frustrating with increasing commuters. Hence, having driving licence gives us freedom to drive anywhere we want. Even my parents are happy that I can drop them to their clubs whenever they require.

In Bangalore, there are numerous driving schools but the most famous one is the Zoom Driving School. My cousin took driving lessons from there and has provided a very positive feedback about it.

As a recent learner, I would like to give you some suggestions. Firstly, you should never argue with the trainer while taking driving lessons as most of the times they give you proper advice and by arguing we just make their job complicated. My other advice would be to be confident about yourself as confidence is the key to better learning.

I wish you best of luck for your driving training. I hope we will meet soon.

Yours,
Anurag

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 10
No. of Words: 224 200
No. of Characters: 1004 1000
No. of Different Words: 142 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.869 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.482 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.381 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.176 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.6 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.235 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.653 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4