Dear Manager,
My name is John employed in your organisation as a Software Engineer. However, this letter in regards to the advertisement for the language course advertised in the local newspaper. Therefore, petitioning to be sponsored by the company to proceed it.
The course is designed to learn and build software using Python language for 30 days and focuses on frameworks and MVC patterns. In addition to this, followed by an online examination and awarding of the certificate at the end.
Thus, the total expenditures for this course are USD 500, including an online examination fee and tax. Accordingly, this course would help to develop demanding software for our company and external customers. Our competitors are also training resources for the same certification. Consequently, it assists in developing cost-efficient software for companies and assists in reducing the cost of the development of software, also, helps to win competitive bids.
Expectedly, looking forward to the approval to attend the course.
Yours Sincerely,
John Moses
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, My name is John employed in your organis...
^^^
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...Software Engineer. However, this letter in regards to the advertisement for the language cour...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54601226994 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18719775282 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650306748466 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.15168817 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1818181818 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274238059641 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094299729537 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522256572653 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125749906824 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804538208482 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.