A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month She is planning to stay with you but you can t do so Tell her the reasons for that Apologize to her Make alternative arrangements

Essay topics:

A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you but you can’t do so.
• Tell her the reasons for that
• Apologize to her
• Make alternative arrangements

Dear John,

I'm so glad to hear you're visiting my country in a few weeks time. As you will see, Nigeria is a good place to spend your vacation. There are many nice sites to visit and several activities that will keep you busy through out your stay.

In your letter, you mentioned that you'd like to stay at my place during the holiday, however, I'm so sorry, you may not be able to do so. My house is a three bedroom apartment and I have two families already in my place. Each family occupies one room, while my wife, our daughter and I are staying in the remaining room, leaving no space for you.

I'm so sorry for this, and have planned to make it up to you.

As an alternative, I intend to lodge you in a hotel very close to my house. It's about three minutes walk from my home, which is as good as staying at my apartment. We still, will be able to go out and share most of the time together.

Please let me know what you think of this plan as soon as possible.

All the best,
Alfred.

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Average: 9.1 (4 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...eral activities that will keep you busy through out your stay. In your letter, you ment...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.163265306122 0.220444632235 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.151020408163 0.167888034529 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0571428571429 0.0606518309736 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0612244897959 0.0506257000042 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.130612244898 0.118615021944 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0938775510204 0.107062808482 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0244897959184 0.041066498444 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.26364806543 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408163265306 0.0385302599488 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00816326530612 0.00132118243153 618% => OK
Determiners: 0.0530612244898 0.0714148451538 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0163265306122 0.0191574576366 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0122448979592 0.00930345855455 132% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1034.0 1141.60824742 91% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.134020619 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30256410256 5.53046319177 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.215384615385 0.284621296913 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.174358974359 0.211203875043 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.107692307692 0.133321485273 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0615384615385 0.0843313296314 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26364806543 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65641025641 0.622163163488 106% => OK
Word variations: 68.6515703678 62.8969750728 109% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.25 16.4300151701 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9214955798 44.7399317507 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1666666667 90.9928171075 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.4300151701 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.613754768223 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 33.6858974359 37.5504026743 90% => OK
Elegance: 0.821428571429 1.13073093955 73% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323011967127 0.331212695627 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0906460580816 0.0927372745006 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0551024656459 0.0736520305886 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.630585482472 0.579516596996 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185688854851 0.180689518051 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131205305042 0.122183219658 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866180750522 0.0765303033291 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.239919493537 0.211926503985 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.077891666932 0.0737400523855 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195445331314 0.203819188451 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885388513334 0.067151250289 132% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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