A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there
Dear Louis,
I have received your email, and cannot wait to see you in Toronto! In this email, I will answer your question in detail.
As I am well aware of your taste that you won't be able to survive even a day without Korean food, I highly recommend you to live NorthYork region. There are plenty of Korean supermarkets in which you can buy almost every Korean product as you used to do back in Korea and Korean restaurants. Therefore, you don't need to worry about getting homesick. Moreover, your school planned to enroll is within the region.
Unfortunately, the quality of public transport is very poor in this city. Many local residents have unpleasant experiences with the frequent malfunction of the subway, as well as the irregular dispatch time of the bus. Without a personal vehicle, it would be a bit hard to live here.
Lastly, one obvious way to interact with new people would be getting closer to school peers so that you can hang out with people from various range of backgrounds over the world.
Anyway, I am really looking forward to seeing you in Toronto.
From your best friend,
Teawo Kim
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... and Korean restaurants. Therefore, you dont need to worry about getting homesick. M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, lastly, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77040816327 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49265372122 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4554162233 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20852669373 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819893704706 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771847353047 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126310958137 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115242357859 0.0580467560999 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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