A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Give contact details for when you are away
- Give instructions about how to care for your pet.
- Describe other household duties
Dear Sam,
I am very grateful that you had accepted my request to look after my house and dog, Snoopy. As, you will be staying at my apartment for the next one week, let me give you some information for your comfort.
For any emergency, you can contact me on my aunt’s land phone which I had given to you earlier. Alternately, you can also text me on my mobile number, as I can only receive text messages, but not calls while on international roaming. My dog Snoopy prefers to eat only fresh meat which, I prepared prepacked portions and put them in the fridge. Make sure she is being fed thrice a day.
Oh! I forgot to mention that I engaged a plumber, who will visit on Wednesday at 11:00 a.m, to check the wash basin in the toilet. Make sure you are around to open the door for him. I deposited some money in your account to take care of any household expenses. I wish you to have a comfortable stay at my house. Thank you once again for helping me.
Your friend
John
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38782319665 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672043010753 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6896483428 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1666666667 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247063668532 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999949223825 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909530971241 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158317827651 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620688690079 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.