A friend has invited you to a party but you will not be able to attend Write to your friend In your letter Tell your friend you can t come Explain why you are unable to attend Arrange another time to meet

Essay topics:

A friend has invited you to a party but you will not be able to attend. Write to your friend. In your letter

Tell your friend you can't come

Explain why you are unable to attend

Arrange another time to meet

Dear Anna,

I just wanted to say thanks for the invite - I would have loved to come, but I'm not going to be in town next weekend. you remember my cousin Jason? Well, he's getting married and the wedding is in London, so I'll be away for three days.

Perhaps we could catch up when I get back? we could go to that new restaurant that's just opened on Queen St. - one of the people I work with went there a few weeks ago and says it's really good. it's about time we caught up – it must be at least 6 months since I saw you and I have some exciting news to tell you about my job!

Anyway, hope you have a good party - I'm sure you will as your parties are always good fun! I remember the new years Eve party at your house three years ago – it was one of the best parties I've been to!

All the best, Mary

Votes
Average: 8.6 (9 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nvite - I would have loved to come, but Im not going to be in town next weekend. y...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...m not going to be in town next weekend. you remember my cousin Jason? Well, hes get...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
...nd. you remember my cousin Jason? Well, hes getting married and the wedding is in L...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...arried and the wedding is in London, so Ill be away for three days. Perhaps we co...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...haps we could catch up when I get back? we could go to that new restaurant thats j...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ack? we could go to that new restaurant thats just opened on Queen St. - one of the p...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...few weeks ago and says its really good. its about time we caught up – it must be at...
^^^
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...few weeks ago and says its really good. its about time we caught up – it must be at...
^^^
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... Anyway, hope you have a good party - Im sure you will as your parties are alway...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...rs ago – it was one of the best parties Ive been to! All the best, Mary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, really, so, well, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 643.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.89696969697 4.54256449028 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.74314335407 2.54303337028 69% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.0600846 44.8134815571 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219616247063 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797287976546 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975988279321 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145165128869 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626971385047 0.0580467560999 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.64 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 41.2886597938 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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