Dear Alex,
I hope you and your family are well. First of all, thank you so much for the invitation to Anne's 8th birthday party. I am so thrilled to know that she is already turning 8 and growing up so fast. I wish her happy birthday and best in her life.
However, I am afraid and terribly sorry that I will not be able to attend her special day. As you know, I am attending a conference in Singapore that week, I have registered for this event almost a month ago, and luckily I was selected. This conference is on Data Analytics which is a crucial topic nowadays. I am anticipating to gain more knowledge and enhance my skills so I can apply for the Data Analyst job position in my company which is highly paid and have aspects of growth. Unfortunately, I will not be able to postpone it.
Although, I am planning to be in your town next month and I am hoping that I can meet you and your family during my trip. Please let me know when you have some time off also convey my apologies to Anne and let her know that I owe her a birthday present.
Yours faithfully
Dave
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, you know, first of all, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26086956522 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44519856233 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584541062802 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8357889046 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191892528425 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707189061413 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638024961536 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136088177861 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531264631848 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.