A friend you met last year has invited you to visit them in their country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letterRequest advice about a gift for his/her familyAsk about ac

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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit them in their country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

Request advice about a gift for his/her family
Ask about activities and clothing
Find out about the food

Dear John,

Hope this letter finds yo in good health and spirits. It feels great to receive an invitation from your end to come and stay with you in your native country. Therefore, I would like you to equip me with some information.

Firstly, in an endevor to make this journey more beautiful and memorable, kindly suggest a present for your family which I can get from my domestic country. Something which they longed to possess. It will be an honor for me to give them something of their choice.

Moreover, as this is the first time I would be coming to New York and I do not have any other relative/acquaintance, kindly tell me what kind of clothes should I carry? As I forsee, it would be bitter cold there, in that case, should i get pullovers and jackets or more heavy woolens. Please let me know the same as I do not want to overload my baggage with unnecessary stuff.

Another area of my interest is to know what events and festivals are prominent at your place. In addition, I would like to see some shows and exhibitions in your vicinity. Last but not the least, as I am a vegetarian, what are the food options available for me? Do i need to carry some packed/ready to cook food?

I would be really glad if you could furnish me with the aforementioned details. Eagerly looking forward for your prompt reply and thereafter meeting you in person.

Kind regards,
Nick

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Hope this letter finds yo in good health...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...bitter cold there, in that case, should i get pullovers and jackets or more heavy...
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Line 9, column 266, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e the food options available for me? Do i need to carry some packed/ready to cook...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, in addition, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5577689243 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72236063748 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605577689243 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2908752244 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185293389721 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599694339787 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593865956188 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114256447129 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731559893097 0.0580467560999 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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