Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
thank them for the photos and for the holiday
explain why you didn’t write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you.
Hi Pearl,
Hope you are doing well. I’m writing to let you know that I’ve received the photographs
of our holiday.
I couldn’t thank you enough for the enjoyable trip at your place in Dubai and the
magnificent pictures captured at various areas. The most eye catching picture I adore is the one which we clicked from Burj Khalifa, the tallest building of Dubai.
I couldn’t write you earlier because I was busy at office. As soon as I arrived from
Dubai, I was pulled by my manager to lead a Chinese project and since then I was occupied in gathering the necessities for the project.
Jennifer and I will be glad if you guys come and stay with us during
the winter break. As the weather over here is pretty cool and the night life during winter
is awesome. Last winter my brother-in-law visited us from India and he didn’t wanted
to leave this city because of the pleasant weather, late night barbeque parties, etc.
Take care of yourself and hope to see you soon.
Kind regards,
Sebastian
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Of
...at I've received the photographs of our holiday. I couldn't thank...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Magnificent
...e trip at your place in Dubai and the magnificent pictures captured at various areas. The...
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Line 17, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...u earlier because I was busy at office. As soon as I arrived from Dubai, I was p...
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Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...you guys come and stay with us during the winter break. As the weather over here ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...cool and the night life during winter is awesome. Last winter my brother-in-law ...
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Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
... from India and he didn't wanted to leave this city because of the pleasant...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97206703911 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60145709927 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687150837989 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7788431411 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9090909091 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233742347296 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840492574691 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740545783115 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867045663266 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826710227301 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.