Dear Leena,
How are you? Hope you are doing good. Although we met last month, it still feels much longer.
Thank you so much for a memorable holiday and the beautiful photos that you couriered me today. It reminisces me our adventure trip to a place, Mumbai. Indeed, it's a magnificent city with remarkable landscapes and wildlife, particularly the south side where you stay currently.
Sorry, I couldn't write you back immediately after the return. As soon as I arrived here, my mother became sick, and I had to hospitalize her for the treatment. She seems to be recovering now and will be fine in a few days. Amid of all problems, I couldn't get time to contact you.
Next month, we are celebrating the 25marriage anniversary of parents and I would like to invite you for the same. We'd be highly delighted if you could attend it. It will be a good chance to meet the rest of a family as well as explore the new places in Bangalore. This time, you have to stay with us. Make sure, you book your tickets early and send me your flight details by the end of this week.
I'll wait for your revert, take care.
Radha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...enture trip to a place, Mumbai. Indeed, its a magnificent city with remarkable land...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...e where you stay currently. Sorry, I couldnt write you back immediately after the re...
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Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... in a few days. Amid of all problems, I couldnt get time to contact you. Next month...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ght details by the end of this week. Ill wait for your revert, take care. Rad...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50243902439 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46789739436 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9580739671 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.6875 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8125 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32294625104 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101226178116 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077633947903 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162032936798 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710588301819 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.93 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.