Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
1. Thank them for the holiday and the photos
2. Explain why you didn’t write earlier
3. Invite them to come and stay with you
Write not less than 150 words
Dear Sara,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing in reference to thank you for your hospitality and for taking wonderful photos which made our vacation memorable. Additionally, you have been a perfect host and all thanks to you we could explore Singapore in a much better way. Although I have received most of the photographs however some are missing can you send those through email to me?
In fact, I wanted to write to you earlier but from the moment I have landed back in india, I have been very busy. To elucidate there have been major changes in my organization, therefore, I have been told to relocate to Bangalore which is in the southern part of india. Hence I was preoccupied with the relocation stuff as a lot of things needed planning.
Lastly, why don't to plan a visit to Bangalore next month, it’s just 4 hours flight from Singapore. we can explore all the alluring tourist spots within the city. additionally, I am sure you will like the weather as it is much pleasant than Singapore.
Looking forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Best wishes
Said
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...which is in the southern part of india. Hence I was preoccupied with the relocation s...
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Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uff as a lot of things needed planning. Lastly, why dont to plan a visit to Bang...
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Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hings needed planning. Lastly, why dont to plan a visit to Bangalore next month...
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Line 6, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...s;s just 4 hours flight from Singapore. we can explore all the alluring tourist sp...
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Line 6, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
...alluring tourist spots within the city. additionally, I am sure you will like the weather as...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponse and seeing you soon. Best wishes Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, lastly, look, so, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65656565657 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59405267382 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5324577753 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244686428302 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080182260583 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05219279815 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134329182318 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631471613011 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.