Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
* apologise for not meeting him/her
* explain why you did not contact him/her earlier
* suggest a time and place to meet in the future
Hello Tom,
I hope you and your family are well! I’m just writing to say sorry for not being at your place last month.
As you know, I was visiting your city to meet my clients who came to see our office headquarter. I’m really upset that I didn’t get much time to do anything while I was with them.
When I reached there, unfortunately, there was a short circuit, which made my two-day trip a nightmare. Although the situation was controlled in a timely manner, still some substantive documents were destroyed. With all this happening, I wasn’t able to contact you.
Well! Everything is settled and smooth now, and planning to get there on this weekend just to catch up with you. Do you know that new cafe, James’s kitchen? They serve scrumptious Italian food, so, if you can get there on Sunday at 5:00 pm, we’ll have some fun time together.
Waiting to see you at the cafe!
With love,
Apoorva
- You drive to work but have recently had a problem parking your car at the office Write a letter to your manager In your letter describe the problem with the parking explain how this is affecting you suggest what should be done about the problem 70
- You recently travelled by plane While you were at the airport a member of staff helped you with a problem and now you would like to show him her your appreciation Write a letter to the manager of the airport In your letter explain what the problem was say 93
- Because of the rising cost of housing many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30s Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Your friend is about to move into a new house Write a letter to your friend In your letter offer to help him her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him her some questions about the new house 56
- Some people fee that playing computer games has a negative impact on children s health and social skill Others say that it can have a positive impact on their lives Discuss both these views 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a timely manner" with adverb for "timely"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
.... Although the situation was controlled in a timely manner, still some substantive documents were ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, still, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69938650307 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46009975052 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711656441718 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.133005731 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254386718044 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102999201434 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744630164036 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15068954896 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395099143158 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.