Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter concerning the loss of my handbag on your flight.
Last week my family and I were on a vacation and we were traveling to Vancouver from London airport. Our flight number was LV586 and my seat number was 13B. It was a long haul journey and after arriving at home immediately I realized my hand luggage had been lost. As per the travel guidelines, I had kept my backpack beneath the front seat because the overhead bin was filled with other passengers’ belongings.
The luggage is a green, medium-sized Samsonite model and it is a leather bag. Since this holiday was the first time it had been used, it should appear to be in good condition. It has two sections one is for laptop and the second can be used for other personal items.
When I left my bag, it contains not only my clothes but also my official laptop, which is highly essential for me. I am requesting you to please take this as a priority and try to find it as soon as possible.
I look forward to your reply and I would be happy if any swift action has taken.
Yours faithfully,
Sudheer Kumar Reddy
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46376811594 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47661705897 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4463555565 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194720257352 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622795057563 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415426311227 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926288814342 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343844144345 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46376811594 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47661705897 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4463555565 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194720257352 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622795057563 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415426311227 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926288814342 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343844144345 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.