The line graph gives information about the percentage of tourists to four attractions including aquarium, castle, zoo, festival in Scotland between 1980 and 2010. Overall, the number of visitors to castle and zoo was getting more favorable through the period of 30 years while festival which was the most popular place and aquarium gradually went down. It can be seen that from 1980 to 2000, the figure of people who visited castle increased substantially to top (around 45%) and zoo fluctuated from 10% to 15%. At the same period, festival, however, starting from the highest point (approximately 30%) in 1980, decreased rapidly through 20 years and aquarium had a steady increase about 35% before falling down to 20%. Starting from 2000, zoo attracted more visitors than the others. As can seen from the graph, the percentage of tourists increased slight around 10% while aquarium, castle and festival reduced
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 789, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14864864865 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55916120298 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0024153955 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114227295754 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698632707571 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850290442812 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114227295754 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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