Criminal activities happens all over the world at different levels. As a punishment of which criminals are prisoned for their crimes according to intensity of their crimes. It is often discussed but rarely understood topic that punishing culprits with imprisonment for criminal activities is best but some other group of people impose stress on better education as an effective measure to prevent crime. Although i agree that detention of lawbreakers is very important, i think good education also play crucial role.
On the one hand, There are numerous people who get involved in illegal activities intentionally like murder, theft, smuggling etcetera. These crimes are so intense that they cannot be justified and specific punishments are made for them according to level of crime. Imprisonment is something which is important for their wrong doings and criminals should be put behind the bars.
However, Imprisonment is something which is post crime activity but there are many ways by these crimes should be prevented. The main factor is providing a better education to the children which include classes of moral values and social behavior. For instance, the main probable cause of illegal activities of a person is its background and lack of eduction which convert a child into a criminal as they learn whatever they see around them and are unable to get proper guidance of ethics and values. So Proper guidance is important for development a good citizen.
To conclude, though i agree that punishment is very necessary for any illegal doings , i think good teaching plays a very crucial role in prevention of crime as we all agree that prevention is better than cure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.48453608247 281% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.85567010309 415% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 273.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17216117216 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75597472135 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8856031804 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161219754027 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612406668174 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517040478097 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103978676693 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170158550824 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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