Dear Sir/Madam,
I am akash chokshi- a loyal customer of Geico insurance company. I am writing this letter to inform you about a camera that i lost on my trip to Fiji.
I am a photographer and I went on a business trip at Fiji on 25th March. I had all my equipments with me. Once i reached at the destination, I realized that one digital camera along with its pouch was missing. The camera is canon EOS 60D, which I purchased from online portal of canon few months back. It is black colored along with 600 mm lens. The camera bag is red and also had a small tripod stand along with memory card of 256 gb in it. I suppose, I lost it during the security check at the airport. My flight was at 4 am and the airports are always swamped with customers in mornings. I was in rush and forgot to check all my belongings before I boarded the flight.
I have already acknowledged the airport authorities about my lost items. However, I have not heard back from them yet. Fortunately, I am insured by Geico in case of loss of personal items. My policy number is 124256. I want to file a claim for my camera as without this camera my work is impeding. I have enclosed the original receipt and the airport police report. Please authorize the claim of 1200 USD that is the price of a new camera.
Thank you for your kind attention. I hope this issue will be resolved soon.
Yours faithfully,
akash chokshi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35741444867 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48821478706 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7828011369 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.5714285714 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5238095238 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135401824614 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415271379158 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678918517652 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11319428601 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085570303393 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.