On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
1. Describe the item you lost
2. Explain how you lost it
3. Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Manager,
I am writing this in concern about the terrible experience I had during my business trip to America.
During that trip, I have lost some of my wealthy belongings that are valuable not only for their coasts but also for their memorial aspect. These loss items are my laptop and my DSLR camera that was in my backpack and also my suitcase with some clothes and some gifts for my family such as a wristwatch, a mobile phone, and one newly bought hand blender.
Last week, I had a meeting for my project in America. At the airport when I received my boarding pass, I found that there are some technical issues in the plane hence, I was shifted to another airplane. I was having only my carry bag with some document such as passport, my license and a little money. At the destination’s airport the airline staff assured me that my belongings were safe and would be sent to my reserved hotel as soon as possible until 8:00 pm. When I enquired from the airline’s staff they apologized for losing them.
Dealing with the circumstance in mind, I hope you will rectify my losses by full refund of the expenses of my missing items to buy them again. I am waiting for your response.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49998347102 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7879919794 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0716346276795 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340403229299 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369644807871 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486716924842 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419140998974 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.