Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent times, the communication, media and entertainment systems have undergone an enormous revolution.Now, it is possible to catch up on latest news and entertainment programs on various handheld devices like mobile. tablet, etc...Today, the debate among people is whether the latest movies should be watched in theater or on devices like tablet or mobile phones. This essay will present the views from both the sides of the debate regarding watching movies in theater or mobile with a plausible conclusion.
Some people like to watch movies in theater since new movies are being made using latest and greatest technology so that the audience can not only enjoy the movie but also experience the movie. Movies based on animation and using three dimensional technology will make an impact on people only when they watch such movies in theaters. Today, the background score in movies also plays a major part in the movie especially the movies that fall in genre like thriller, action and horror. Many Kids fancy to watch animated movies on large screen to be amazed by the humongous size of their favorite characters. Therefore, some people will always prefer and continue to watch movies in large screen.
Some people prefer watching movies on mobile rather than theater because movies tickets very expensive nowadays. Moreover, it is difficult to get tickets and preferred seating in auditorium when visiting with family or in large groups. The biggest advantage of watching movies in mobile is it allows an individual to decide where he want sit and enjoy the movie.Moreover, the movies in mobile have feature to pause or stop the playback so this allows them to take care of urgent tasks and continue the movie after the task. One doesn't have to sit for long hours at stretch and watch movies. They can watch movies as per their convenience. However, watching movies in mobile does not provide the experience that one get's when they watch the movie in theater
This essay discussed both the advantages and disadvantage of watching movies in theater. Therefore, it is the choice of an individual to either watch movies in theater or mobile.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 5.05154639175 356% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 26.3917525773 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 937.175257732 192% => OK
No of words: 356.0 206.0 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05898876404 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61201973143 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 127.690721649 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502808988764 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 290.88556701 195% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.448804346 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.066666667 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0580987432987 0.216113520407 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290820488158 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288080749675 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456015076832 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229157308136 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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