Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department . In your letter include : - What delayed you, - how missing this flight affected you, - what you would like the airport to do about this issue.
To whom it may concern;
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding your domestic departure elevator that lead some serious problem while I was flying from New York, The Usa to Heathrow airportin London, The UK.
Please allow me to accentuate with details.
As we were going to international terminal, we wanted to use corner lift with my partner. At first step, everything was usual as we had expected but unusual thing is that it remained middle of 3rd building and stopped moving up.
In spite of fact that I pressed help button more than twenty times, any staff did not respond us to call helping. Finally, we reached ground floor after we had been waiting for a long time but it had not been finished yet.
Much worse scenario is that we were late and were not able to attend boarding and aircraft due to this small fault.
We were expecting to join sales conference in London in which will provide much more knowledge on our future career.
I fully hope that you understand that I was very disappointed about this issue. As a manager of Human Resources you might check and repair the all lift and other equipment of facilities.
I would be grateful so that anyone would not find themselves such difficult circumstances.
I look forward to hearing from you positive response in the near future.
Your faithfully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, regarding, so, while, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84453781513 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59182401536 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701680672269 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8263530985 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0833333333 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114203390401 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428072327688 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489211563291 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0393332331071 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533984876005 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.