Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.
Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter.
• Introduce yourself
• Explain what the problem is
• Suggest solutions to the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring your attention to the noise pollution caused by the ongoing road maintenance work outside my house on North Street.
My name is William Smith and I am a resident of Gold Coast, Australia. I have been living here for over 15 years, and I have never had complain to the council for any reason before.
For some-time, our society was happy to see that the authorities have started to repair the roads. But, after a few days, it became a nightmare for us as we are unable to sleep at night. The noise from the heavy machines is causing inconvenience to me as well as to other residents in the neighbourhood. Besides this, students who are preparing for the upcoming exams are also unable to focus.
I have tried to contact the council offices on several occasions to report the problem, but still, nothing has been done. I would like to suggest that you employ additional workers to speed up the repair process and strictly confine the work to daytime as most of the residents and students are in their offices and schools.
I look forward to the problem being resolved.
Yours Faithfully,
Willaim Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'complained'.
Suggestion: complained
...for over 15 years, and I have never had complain to the council for any reason before. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'complained'.
Suggestion: complained
...for over 15 years, and I have never had complain to the council for any reason before. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ts are in their offices and schools. I look forward to the problem being resol...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, look, so, still, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71568627451 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54377288079 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656862745098 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8947772466 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4545454545 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166357603634 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562408437296 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527414419815 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09156290304 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571538454576 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.