Work is being done on the street where you live The noise is disturbing you Write a letter of complaint to your local council In your letter Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem

Essay topics:

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:
 Introduce yourself
 Explain what the problem is
 Suggest solutions to the problem

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the on-going project of road maintenance at Hill street as this has become a cause of annoyance for many.
I am Malisha Smith, resident of Hill street. Since past ten years, my experience of living here has always been pleasurable and uninterrupted until this recent scenario.
As aforementioned, our street is under repair works due to pits and dugs. Although I am quite impressed with the concern of council regarding infrastructure of area, it is causing inconvenience to the localities. The work commences at 8 am with loads of drilling and hammering that has led to loss of tranquillity in the morning. Not only this, the culmination of this work is done in the late evenings which is troublesome for the children who have exams forthcoming.
Now, it is my earnest request from all the members of locality that either the schedule should be altered a little or employing more workers to speed up the task can cater the problem. Besides this, if noisy work can be done in the hours when less people are at home, then this could also work for everyone.
Hoping for your prompt action onto this matter.
Yours faithfully, 6th April,2021
Malisha Smith 

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir I am writing this letter to draw your at...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...oisy work can be done in the hours when less people are at home then this could also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, regarding, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78095238095 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69035397953 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 210.0 16.3608247423 1284% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1004.0 76.5299724578 1312% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 210.0 16.8248392259 1248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.0 4.34317383033 875% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172461322544 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172461322544 0.0766984524023 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860445417512 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279665514348 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 106.1 8.37731958763 1267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -124.75 70.7449484536 -176% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 82.8 7.45979381443 1110% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.92 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.59 7.59969072165 231% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 8.62886597938 661% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 86.0 8.54432989691 1007% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 8.15463917526 699% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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