Dear Ron,
How are you? First of all, heartful gratitude to you for the book which you had lent me last month in order to make my presentation, also, I want to tell you that how delighted I am feeling owing to attaining first position in the marketing presentation.
Well, to be honest, I was waiting for this international marketing presentation since the time I had joined Amazon ; an e-commerce company as a senior marketing manager. Fortunately, the opportunity came, and I did not want to let it go, because it was not only related to my careers growth, but also provided me a chance to present myself in front of foreign delegates, which certainly led to the international job offerings.
That being said, your book had helped me a lot to clear my perception on the ways of online marketing. What is more the do's and don'ts that a seller must follow while marketing the variety of products that were to be included in my presentation also got cleared by your book.
So, I am visiting you next week along with your precious book , and I will bring your favourite sweet as a treat.
I thank you once again. looking forward to meeting you soon.
Regards,
Mariya
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Ron, How are you? First of all, heartful grat...
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... month in order to make my presentation, also, I want to tell you that how delig...
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...in order to make my presentation, also, I want to tell you that how delighted I ...
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... in the marketing presentation. Well, to be honest, I was waiting for this int...
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...y came, and I did not want to let it go, because it was not only related to my ca...
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...on also got cleared by your book. So, I am visiting you next week along with ...
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...ook. So, I am visiting you next week along with your precious book , and I wi...
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...as a treat. I thank you once again. looking forward to meeting you soon. Regards...
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...forward to meeting you soon. Regards, Mariya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, so, well, while, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68269230769 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75547692083 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.659102234 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299627465433 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121251517686 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809162925323 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159970329207 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847794377403 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.