Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include:Why you want to work in a different countryWhat type of work you will be looking forQuestions you have about working in a different c

Essay topics:

Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include:

Why you want to work in a different country

What type of work you will be looking for

Questions you have about working in a different country that your friend may be able to answer

Hi Nichole,

I Hope you are doing well and this letter brings you the cheerfulness. I would like to inform and need suggestion on that I am planning to look for a job in other countries. My main objective is to settle aborad as well as find jobs which is suitable for my career. As you already know, I have completed Bachelor Degree in Computer Science and Engineering. So that, i am predominantly looking for the job in Sofware sectors. In addition, as I have scarce exploration of other countries, so please assist me on the things which would really help me when I get there. Most difficult and essential things which certainly need immigrant is accommodation. I would like to know that which online reference is useful to find my needs. So please mention those details and return back to the address which I mentioned back. Your suggestion is going to be helpful for my future endeavor. I am looking forward to receiving a letter from you.

With Regards,

Abc

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...puter Science and Engineering. So that, i am predominantly looking for the job in...
^
Line 5, column 765, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...ds. So please mention those details and return back to the address which I mentioned back. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70760233918 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77445784985 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0158685193 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12228645411 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499836889839 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672863482877 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123676316287 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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