Write a letter to invite your friend to a music concert you are planning to go. You should write
What is the concert of the music concert
When and where is the music concert
Why do you think your friend will go to this concert
Dear Jane,
I hope this letter finds you well. As we haven't seen each other for a long time, I'd like to see you as soon as possible. Listen! I must tell you about a Pop music concert which is going to be held next week. I have a plan to see each other at the concert. It would be really unforgettable!
I've read about the concert on the Internet which will be held in Spring hall located on Park Street. It is on the 1st of June next Sunday. I' ve heard that the Spring hall is extremely gorgeous and huge. It can be really exciting.
I know, you are a big fan of Pop music concerts. Above all, you are very close to Park Street. Besides, you aren' t busy normally on Sundays. I would be really grateful if we could see each other at the event. I hope you can handle your schedules to come with me.
I look forward to catching up with you soon!
All the best,
Sarah Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... hope this letter finds you well. As we havent seen each other for a long time, Id lik...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...havent seen each other for a long time, Id like to see you as soon as possible. Li...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...t. It would be really unforgettable! Ive read about the concert on the Internet ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ndle your schedules to come with me. I look forward to catching up with you so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12068965517 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11298166221 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9221288239 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.2142857143 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4285714286 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26355683851 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848254489771 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730697117235 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147756783321 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852895774727 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.73 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.23 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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