Write a letter to your company’s director recommending a group in your local community that deserve help.
why do you suggest that group?
How can your company help that group?
How that can benefit your company in return?
Dear Mr. Adam,
I am writing to recommend a local group for a donation. This will help our local community as a whole in addition to our colleagues with low pay scales.
The Children Welfare group is local non-profit organization run by a couple of friends. Their goal is to eradicate illiteracy and install practical talent in the poor children of our community. They have recently run out of funds to run their latest project to construct a school for the poor children. In this respect, our company can provide them with books, sports equipment, contribute to the teacher’s salaries or furniture like chairs and tables, which can help to smooth running this great cause.
On the other hand, our company will be tremendously benefited by such contribution. As it will increase our reputation, which will in turn increase our sales. Additionally, they have promised to provide free education to the children of our lower management staff. Which will increase their morale and motivation level.
I hope to hear from you, in case you need any further information about the organization, feel free to contact me on my mobile number.
Yours sincerely,
SAIRA
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10362694301 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86207411283 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8475981435 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170472087475 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616839163846 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629769115914 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825611604677 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534574397838 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.