WRITING TASK 1 – General Writing IELTSYou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter•give contact details for when you are aw

Dear Rajeev,

I couldn't be more grateful to you as you have agreed to take care of my house during my absence. I am really thankful to you to help me at a time when I had to leave at such a short notice.

Rajeev, let me assure you that I will receive your calls and text messages with high importance sould you need to contact me. My phone number is +91-122334545665 and you can reach me via mail at this address - 420, Doongri Colony, Raipur, M.P., pin - 123456.

Firstly, I would require you to give your helping hand for the care of my beloved pet dog Rosa. She is a very loving creature and I am sure you will enjoy her company. For the next few days, you will be required to arrange food for her thrree times a day - at 7 a.m., 3 p.m., and 9 p.m. - and to take her out for a walk in the evening when she will clear her bowels. Also, she needs to be taken to our colony's pet grooming centre every week.

As far as my household duties are concerned are concerned, you will be required to switch on the electric water pump at 6 a.m. and 5 p.m. everyday to fill the water tank as well as water the plants in my garden. Another task is to keep the house clean by supervising my maid while she is doing her daily dusting and mopping because she tends to shirk work many a times.

The above are all the tasks that I would require you to take care of. Again, I would be immensely thankful for your support at this moment. I would see you in three weeks' time. Until then, I want you to take good care of yourself.

Yours lovingly,
Pratap.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
Dear Rajeev, I couldnt be more grateful to you as you have agr...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... thrree times a day - at 7 a.m., 3 p.m., and 9 p.m. - and to take her out for a w...
^^
Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'are concerned'.
Suggestion: are concerned
... week. As far as my household duties are concerned are concerned, you will be required to switch on the ...
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Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...lectric water pump at 6 a.m. and 5 p.m. everyday to fill the water tank as well as water...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 362, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...ng because she tends to shirk work many a times. The above are all the tasks that I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, really, so, then, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15282392027 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18185328126 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 373.5 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3847252394 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198231351869 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783325194619 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422361585511 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112023010925 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305723841557 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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