Dear mrs Truze,
I am Sarah, daughter of your tenant, mrs Lopez. As you know we have just moved to your property on Alley street. First of all, I must thank you about all repairs that we had wanted you to should be done and everything were in the best way.
However, there are some problems in some of the furniture that have caused issues. Legs of study tables in two rooms; underground and bedroom tables have a kind of tip, and unfortunately, in many cases my sister and I have poured our coffee on the floor and on our clothing by putting the cup on them. Although, you said that these tables are antiques and they are related to your grandmother’s mother’s house and we should be careful when using them. However, we want you to replace them.
We have decided to convey both of them to the roof and cover them by plastics and foils carefully in order to protect them against bad air conditions. Therefore, if you could please kindly consider our problems and let us know about your decision and opinion.
We are eager to receive our letter response as soon as possible
With bests and loves
Lopez family
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ah, daughter of your tenant, mrs Lopez. As you know we have just moved to your pro...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... However, there are some problems in some of the furniture that have caused issues. Legs...
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... With bests and loves Lopez family
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, kind of, you know, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62561576355 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36600939068 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615763546798 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5787504788 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18065347692 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803079727962 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461956845258 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970035430736 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458491380261 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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