you are an alumnus of a bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. recently an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview.write a letter to the entrance. in your -letter stat

Essay topics:

you are an alumnus of a bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. recently an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview.

write a letter to the entrance. in your

-letter state your reason for writing -

briefly describe the interview and inform the entrance of a possibility to cancel it -

propose a convenient time for an interview

Dear Mr Smith,

I am Anna George, a volunteer interview at bluegill University. As you might have got an email regarding your interview with me which is fixed on 26 December, next week. I am inscribing this message to inform you that due to my personal issues I am unable to take your interview. I hope you will take it easily.

Here, I would like to tell you some valuable information about interview. It is going to be held in 43 Park avenue, City centr, and cabin number is 27. It would be regarding your internship experience in terms of time, grade, and reviews. You will have to cover all the queries related your work as you have very less time to prepare for it; so it is definitely possible to delay the date in order to let you do preparation.

Finally, I have decided to conduct your interview in following month on 2nd January. Please let me know whether you are comfortable with the given time if not please write me back soon.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Anna George.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47540983607 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51734109352 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8436271677 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4545454545 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303977243387 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097916627839 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685932359064 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165714355602 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811898866116 0.0580467560999 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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