You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:Say where you are goingDescribe your houseExplain some of the things your friend must do to look after

Dear Ashline,

I hope you and your family are in ravishing health. I am writing this letter to thank you for taking responsibility for looking after my house in my absence, I am very much appreciated.

As I told you earlier, I am traveling for some business purpose for three weeks this July to France. Currently, I am on a cruise, that is why not able to call you. In two days, I will reach Paris and join with my the rest of the team at the hotel.

I own a two-story small house, so you can take care of it easily, it would not be a tough job. I have an open kitchen, dining area and living room on ground floor with combined restroom. At the first floor, three bedrooms are there, and an open terrace with beautiful plants and majestic view, you can enjoy your free time there. You can also use any two bedrooms to sleepover at night.

I just need you to set the alarm whenever you go out, as recently one burglary case happen in our are and please be secure. I left the alarm code on the kitchen shelf. Also, it would be nice if you could water plants once a week, and put the trash out every Tuesday.

I will bring some French chocolates for you and give a call once I reach on land.

Thank you,

ABC

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22127659574 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21364139802 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621276595745 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3540836774 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8571428571 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270928395614 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086775096897 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574071206623 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145164533243 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679920952431 0.0580467560999 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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