Dear Sir,
I am ABC from India, I have seen advertisement of your university in the newspaper today and i wish to apply for master’s degree in Business management stream.
I have completed my graduation in business management from one of the top business school of India and i want to inquire about post graduate program of your university in the same stream. I had a research on top-notch business management courses of your country and found that the best academic results were from your university only.
There are good placements also in the last couple of year with proven track records. I have decided to pursue my carrier in Marketing so this course structure will help me to grow in future. Through newspaper i came to know that you have a good hostel and restaurant facility in your campus within budgeted prices, also you do provide scholarship to the bright and talented students.
I have achieved more than 80% during my bachelor’s degree and i am too much devoted to my studies so i request you to please consider my profile for this scholarship program. I will be deeply obliged with your consideration and would wait to hear from you.
Thanks
ABC
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72643966931 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5960591133 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8563568218 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216765968407 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781328785622 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533664732792 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122731540261 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241806365924 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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