You are planning to go on a holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter.
• Why you need a holiday.
• Your holiday plans.
• Why you need your friend to join with you.
Dear John,
It`s been a long time since we last met. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing invite you for joining my next overseas vacation to Australia.
My company has awarded a contract with an important client, and I was one of the team who is selected to work on it. The project activities are still in closure stage, but I decided to take a break and travel abroad for relaxation. You know that I have been working continues over one year without taking any holiday.
Australia is a big country; however, I decided to visit only New South Wealth in this vacation. There are a lot of sightseeing to be visited, and many interesting historical places from the old centuries which I am amazed with. My departure to Sydney will be on 1st September, and travel back after two weeks of stay there.
It would be a pleasure if you joined me in this trip to Australia. Therefore, I would request that you arrange your travel documentation and all other visa requirement. It might take some time from you for these arrangements. I hope that you can catch the travel plan.
Warm regards,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.675 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61112523637 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9787281369 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9230769231 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230909521366 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741164260169 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812730002585 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135210152 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904214545495 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.